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APP Writing in child's speak

Overall rating 3 out of 53.9 (16 ratings)

Last updated 12 April 2013, created 28 February 2010, viewed 30,231

This is a great rersource as it puts the app writing doc into easy language. I have used this myself to assess children's work and i have given it to children to assess their own writing which has worked really well. Hope you find it of use as this has eeen a great help for me.

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Great thank you! Just need to change to 'can' from 'will' to fit my school. I have never heard of burger sentences but in the context assume it is complex sentences.

from ambermt, 12 April 2013
(report comment) 5 out of 5

Very good, thanks

from Viola123, 20 May 2012
(report comment) 5 out of 5

THank you. So useful.

from pleasemiss__, 27 December 2011
(report comment) 4 out of 5

thankyou for the support in generating my own, as i've never been the strongest, and it's closely linked to the APP grids. But it also enabled to do one for level 1 (which isn't inlcuded here). To espaguete. Try looking here - a great resource that really explains the concept of burger sentencs, as i had to look it up. For my version I've replaced the word burger with longer, as that makes more sense to our children who've not yet encountered the burger sentence. http://www.fox.rbkc.sch.uk/fox/teaching-and-learning/curriculum-docs/handouts/Sentence-Structure.pdf or this one is better http://www.google.co.uk/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=burger%20sentence&source=web&cd=2&ved=0CCQQFjAB&url=%2Furl%3Fsa%3Dt%26rct%3Dj%26q%3Dburger%2520sentence%26source%3Dweb%26cd%3D2%26ved%3D0CCQQFjAB%26url%3Dhttp%253A%252F%252Fimprovingwriting.wikispaces.com%252Ffile%252Fview%252Ffun%252Bways%252Bof%252Bimproving%252Bwriting.doc%26ei%3DGZTbTvODCtPE8QOU89HLAg%26usg%3DAFQjCNFVYGCJZY9gttcpRCeo6Vtjbr9DZg&ei=GZTbTvODCtPE8QOU89HLAg&usg=AFQjCNFVYGCJZY9gttcpRCeo6Vtjbr9DZg A great resource of you can find it direct by typing in burger sentences = look for the improvingwriting.wikispaces.com for the link. Once again many thanks to the original sharer.

from corner_thatch, 04 December 2011
(report comment) 4 out of 5

Unless I am going nuts - there is a very odd reference to burger that is repeated several times in this grid - burger sentences! Quite bizarre! I would like to know what it should be so I can correct it. I still think this is very useful but obviously won't give this out to my children as they won't be able to take burger sentences seriously!

from espaguete, 28 November 2011
(report comment) 4 out of 5
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