A model descriptive writing text based on the beautiful wordless picture book Journey by Aaron Becker.
The model text describes the girl approaching and entering the city in her boat.
The description comes with a feature find task, which asks pupils to search for the following writing features including figurative language and other literary devices:
• similes
• metaphors
• hyperbole
• personification
• repetition for effect
• onomatopoeia
• alliteration
• show not tell feelings
An answer sheet has been included.
The description can be used as a WAGOLL before pupils write their own description based on Journey.
The resources come in easily editable Word format and as PDFs.
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Other Journey themed resources:
✦ Example Writing BUNDLE
✦ Example Diary Text Pack
✦ Character Profile Example Text Pack
✦ Dialogue Text Examples Pack
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✦ Journey by Aaron Becker: Example Writing Bundle
✦ Example Diary: Journey by Aaron Becker
✦ Character Profile Example: Journey by Aaron Becker
✦ Dialogue Text Examples Differentiated: Journey by Aaron Becker
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