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Example diary entry text for Stone Age Boy written from the point of view of the boy on the day he falls down the hole, plus writing feature identification worksheet. This exemplar recount text is perfect to use as a WAGOLL after reading the first twelve pages of Satoshi Kitamura’s picture book Stone Age Boy.

The diary text contains the following language, grammar and punctuation features:
• Similes
• Metaphors
• Hyperbole
• Rule of three
• Alliteration
• Repetition for effect
• Fronted adverbials followed by a comma
• Synonyms to avoid repetition
• Expanded noun phrases
• Commas in a list
• Apostrophes for contraction

Pupils can read the example diary entry, identify the features and then write one of the following, including the features in their writing:
• A continuation of the diary entry, describing the Stone Age girl’s name, family, camp, food etc.
• A diary entry for the next day
• A series of diary entries for the following days
• A diary written by Om, the girl

All resources are available as PDFs and easily editable Word documents.

Answers for the feature identification worksheet are included.

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Other Stone Age Boy resources:
Stone Age Boy Example Texts BUNDLE
Stone Age Boy Character Profile Examples and Differentiated Templates
Stone Age Boy Example Dialogue Texts Differentiated, Feature Identification & Answers
Stone Age Boy 3 Example Instruction and Recipe Texts Plus Templates
Stone Age Boy Fronted Adverbials Differentiated Worksheets & Answers

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A collection of example texts based on the children's picture book *Stone Age Boy* by Satoshi Kitamura. • A set of differentiated example dialogue texts • A set of example character profiles • A set of example instructions including a recipe • Example diary entry • **Bonus resource**: Fronted adverbials differentiated worksheets Feature identification sheets or templates have been included with the WAGOLLs, so that pupils can write their own texts based on the exemplars. These resources can be used whilst studying the book *Stone Age Boy* or as WAGOLLs during cross-curricular writing lessons when studying the Stone Age in history. If you buy this resource and are pleased with your purchase, leave a review and receive another up to the value of this one for free. Just email [helen-teach@outlook.com](mailto:helen-teach@outlook.com) with your username, the reviewed resource and the resource you would like for free. You may also be interested in: ✦ [Christophe’s Story Example Letter, Feature Identification & Answers](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/christophe-s-story-example-letter-feature-identification-and-answers-12581272) ✦ [Christophe’s Story Dialogue Writing Example with Feature Identification, Answers & Extract](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/christophe-s-story-dialogue-writing-example-with-feature-identification-answers-and-extract-12581334) ✦ [Christophe’s Story Example Diary Entries, Feature Identification & Answers](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/christophe-s-story-example-diary-entries-feature-identification-and-answers-12579049) ✦ [Stig of the Dump Character Profile Example, Feature Sheet, Answers & Template](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/stig-of-the-dump-character-profile-example-feature-sheet-answers-and-template-12488511) ✦ [The Iron Man Character Profile Example, Feature Sheet, Answers & Template](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/the-iron-man-character-profile-example-feature-sheet-answers-and-template-12496974) Visit [Helen-Teach’s Shop](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resources/shop/Helen-Teach) for more resources.

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