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teachers need chocolate! persuasion examples

Overall rating 4 out of 54.8 (30 ratings)

Last updated 18 April 2014, created 19 February 2012, viewed 39,401

After many struggles in teaching persuasion and marking 'persuasive' writing, I developed this essay based on the need for teachers to have a free chocolate...all the time! The bad example is based on the mistakes that the kids were making. The good example highlights sentence openers etc. that they can use...

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    persuasive writing - good and bad - teachers in need of chocolate!.doc (27kb, Word document)
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Wow-love this! Thank you very much

from sara 123, 18 April 2014
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This is awesome. Thanks!

from brescianim, 08 April 2014
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Thank you

from Miller3, 17 March 2014
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Thank you for sharing. I shall be using this in the near future. Well done

from lepa, 14 March 2014
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Love it! :)

from jeng126, 26 February 2014
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