teachers need chocolate! persuasion examples

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Last updated 29 April 2013, created 19 February 2012, viewed 19,476

After many struggles in teaching persuasion and marking 'persuasive' writing, I developed this essay based on the need for teachers to have a free chocolate...all the time! The bad example is based on the mistakes that the kids were making. The good example highlights sentence openers etc. that they can use...

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persuasive writing - good and bad - teachers in need of chocolate!.doc (27kb, Word document)

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A great way to engage the students in ways to improve their writing. The children loved the context of the text. Many thanks. from dwebb59, 29 April 2013	(report comment)	5 out of 5
Will be useful for a number of year groups! Thanks! from shearigney, 22 April 2013	(report comment)	5 out of 5
How can anyone give this less than 5 stars? Thank you so much. from asnac, 21 April 2013	(report comment)	5 out of 5
Brilliant! Great work. More like this please! :-) from bearded_dragon, 16 April 2013	(report comment)	5 out of 5
Just what I needed thanks! from punakha, 08 March 2013	(report comment)	5 out of 5
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