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A grade 9 response to the AQA June 2018 Paper 2 Question 5 about corruption in sport.

‘All sport should be fun, fair and open to everyone. These days, sport seems to be more about money, corruption and winning at any cost.’ Write an article for a newspaper in which you explain your point of view on this statement.

It starts with a powerful anecdote.

It moves on to two content paragraphs about how corruption and money is ruining sport.

The next paragraph offers a solution.

It ends by returning to the anecdote to gain high marks for sophisticated whole text structure and organisation.

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